I'll say this: your art skills are decent but it doesn't look like you really cared to animate this effectively or use quality audio recordings. Something as simple as a walk cycle will make your stuff look a lot more presentable. And as a result of the audio and voices being so poor I'm also not really sure what the characters here were trying to convey or what the story was supposed to be in general. It's just random nothing. I think you have the ability to make great things but this unfortunately felt more like a half baked animatic than anything.